"I draft the opposite way," he says, thoughtfully sipping his wine as he turns the plain flyer in his hand. "My first draft is a wild garden gone to seed; I weed out whatever's unnecessary in the second. If you're to describe what's best and brightest in your meetings, you might need to write with a little more passion. Perhaps even use an exclamation mark." He smirks. "Or recruit Grantaire. He never lacks for passionate words."